πŸ’€ First pages of my personal comic project β€œThe Seven Deaths of Evelyn Hardcastle” – looking for feedback on storytelling and visual consistency

πŸ’€ First pages of my personal comic project β€œThe Seven Deaths of Evelyn Hardcastle” – looking for feedback on storytelling and visual consistency picture 1 of 2
πŸ’€ First pages of my personal comic project β€œThe Seven Deaths of Evelyn Hardcastle” – looking for feedback on storytelling and visual consistency picture 2 of 2