๐Ÿ’€ First pages of my personal comic project โ€œThe Seven Deaths of Evelyn Hardcastleโ€ โ€“ looking for feedback on storytelling and visual consistency

๐Ÿ’€ First pages of my personal comic project โ€œThe Seven Deaths of Evelyn Hardcastleโ€ โ€“ looking for feedback on storytelling and visual consistency picture 1 of 2
๐Ÿ’€ First pages of my personal comic project โ€œThe Seven Deaths of Evelyn Hardcastleโ€ โ€“ looking for feedback on storytelling and visual consistency picture 2 of 2